A POEM I WROTE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys , i wrote a poem ........ but i need a title =)

Ok read it and tell me if you like it , and try to find out a title =)

 

thanx ( mrsarmstrong ) * courtney *

 

HERE IT IS ...................

 

Escaping in the big city of New York 

Walking the streets, trying to find somwhere to go in the open world

Outside of your mind, your alone

Not even a guardian to take care of you

Not even a friend to walk with or talk to

In your world , no bright blue clouds or burnt orange sunsets to watch

Sliting your wrists to the vein

No life to live, just a bady in the dark

Sitting around crying your pain away

But their is one friend that will walk and be with you

And that will always love you dearly

Theirs God

Just remember : Your not alone !!!!!!


Posted on 05/24/2007 10:32 PM Visits: 25
pjasi: 05/25/2007 3:49 AM
Name it:God
BisexualAngel: 05/25/2007 8:37 AM
I like it...
pjasi said:
Name it:God

I agree with what pjasi said...
cutechic: 05/25/2007 4:41 PM
i ued to write poems too.
i have them private on my buzznet though...
i dont ppl to read them unless theyask..lol

well i really liked it:]

i like this title better
treasurex said:
awesome poem.id call it: Your not alone
emoxloserfacexrocker: 05/26/2007 11:00 AM
yeah, i agree
name :You're not alone
retrobee: 12/02/2008 12:50 PM
don't know
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